For starters this was the 1st story i read on this site, and that i've even read in a long time... and so, to me i felt that this had a lot of big words which confused me, and kinda drew away from the story itself, and... needless to say i kept reading the same lines over n over... not on purpose, but on accident, and so i got very confused... So i'm left speechless... not in a good way, but more as in a lack of words to describe what i've just read. I will say this much, i do agree with the other in the lack of content. Do I hear sequel? ;)